Great looking display!
I have a few constructional critiques.
1) VMFA-533 is not a Carrier deployable squadron. The USMC tends to forward deploy all their "D" A/C. They will go onboard for CARQUAL but that is about it.
2) Your A/C Director (Yellow Shirt) is in the wrong place. This is clearly staged on the Waist Cats and is part of FLY 2, not FLY 1.
3) Weathering. After just a few weeks of blue water ops the entire AirWing will show obvious wear and tear and unless the MO is a short timer or doesn't care, he'll have the PCs out there wiping birds down all the time.
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